高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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my town is most beautiful please in the world as i think , we always love which city we lived, but my home town was very significant , because my home town is tourist area! there so many people go to see the scenery when the holiday coming. they come to see the figure of Buddha and Visits to it. make Sincerely wish ，for everything will be good. and so many people believe that . they believe the wish will come true. my home town green hills and water . people who lived here everyone friendly . i love my home town .