题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。
It is believed that since the computer was created, it has been used almost everything. With the development of computers, it gradually has been used not only in mathematics, physics, chemistry and astronomy, but in place like hospital, library and military army to replace the work of man. However, it is most popular used in communication among ordinary people. In the past, when we want to communicate to someone, we must meet each other ,with the time development ,we can write a letter ,call a phone to someone ,tills the computer was created ,we began sending a emails to our friends replaced writing to them. Now, there are so many communication software we using, we are no longer must to runs to somewhere for meeting someone ,we can use our computer voice or video. However, this phenomenon has influenced our Interpersonal communication .We communicate with each other in this way we can't see their expressions on face, so we can't know whether the man we are communication is real happy ,sad or others by expressions, only by the means of letter. It is really not in favour of the Internet on Interpersonal communication.