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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17423
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分84.0分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;可适当增加几条从句。

用户练习作文:

It is believed that since the computer was created, it has been used almost everything. With the development of computers, it gradually has been used not only in mathematics, physics, chemistry and astronomy, but in place like hospital, library and military army to replace the work of man. However, it is most popular used in communication among ordinary people. In the past, when we want to communicate to someone, we must meet each other.With the time development, we can write a letter ,call a phone to someone, still the computer was created, we began emailing to our friends replaced writing to them. Now, there are so many communication software we using, we are no longer must to runs to somewhere for meeting someone ,we can use our computer voice or video. However, this phenomenon has influenced our Interpersonal communication .We communicate with each other in this way we can't see their expressions on face, so we can't know whether the man we are communication is real happy ,sad or others by expressions, only by the means of letter. It is really not in favour of the Internet on Interpersonal communication.

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