能够运用简单的从句,但不熟练;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇,但词汇表达多样性不高,拼写检查还需加强;请注意分段。
Ladies and Gentlemen,welcome to our city--Nanjing,please allow me to introduce this beautiful city briefly.Nanjing stands south-east of china,as the captial of Jiangshu province,the city has five million people .Nanjing is a ancient city,where ten dynasties has founded capical within the 2400 years of the city's history.There are many historical sceneries in the city,suck like Xuanwu Lake,Jiming Temple,and stone city,etc,and if you prefer to modern style,many uptodate indurstrial factory and high buildings situade in there you can visit.