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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6311
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;全文结构较为严谨。

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Trust is to interpersonal relationships what water is to fish.However,as the society develops,people become indifferent and trust turns away.It is vital for us to maintain the trust relationship. Firstly,if we want to be trusted,we should be worth trusting.It means we ought to be frank.Only in this way can people believe what we say.Secondly,once we build trust,it is suitable for us to share interesting secrets sometimes,which keeps our trust.Thirdly,there is no doubt that we may not tell each other everything about ourselves.Therefore,we need to be comprehensive and put ourselves in place of others. To sum up,there are many things we can do to maintain trust.Even though it is difficult occasionally.It is worthwhile.Maintain trust and we live a comfortable life。

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