2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇表达不够丰富，要多积累学术词汇；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；能够使用一些不错的从句；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

computer and man As we all know,computer is important in our daily life. People us it in many place, but in order to think creative,people should know that computer is not always useful. there is no doubt that our work,study and chat can not leave computer, it provide many things to us. i think it is very useful for human .