雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

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As the transportation highly developed and the visa policy relevant simplified, an increasing people choose to travel overseas. To enjoy exotic scenery is absolutely an exciting thing, but along with this hot trend there are some hidden points deserve us to pay attention to. Referring to the positive effect of traveling to other countries, many of us will surely agree that overseas tourism can let people to feel the charm of various cultures. Travelling abroad will help different people from different nations build and facilitate their friendship. It obviously have a very good influence on culture exchange and world peace. In the meanwhile, the consumption of foreign tourists can make contribution to the local economy. However, every coin has two sides. Compared with those people who are likely to go abroad, there are still many people won't prefer to go. Why? The safety is a very big concern. The severe traffic accident, kidnapping and religious clash are always scaring us. Despite, too many tourists crowd into the scenery reserves will bring a big pressure for the local natural resource protection. To sum up, traveling to other countries has both positive and negative effect. All we have to is to be a tourist with good manner. Only tourists with good manner during their traveling will help the development of the overseas tourism.