托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

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A majority of people begin to realize that living in a rural area or living around a lot of people are an important problem for us. When asked people agree or disagree that living in a rural area is better than living in a city? People will give various of answers based on their individual value systems. On balance, I can't agree more with the statement for the following reasons. To begin with, I concede that living in a city has many good aspects. such as, the convenient life, lots of fun, greater income and so on. These aspects can meet many people's requirement. So, for these people who pursue the high incomes, colorful life, living around many people is a good choice. For another aspects, living in a city is more convenient. For example, now many old person have heart or brain ills which need to do some check in the hospital. If they live in the city, it can save much time. In this sense, living in a city has many benefits. However, compelling these cases may sound, they cannot overshadow the significant role that living in a rural plays in the place people living. Living in a rural area can improve people's health. For example, the air in the rural is more clear than city, many doctors suggests the patients to live in a rural for several months. My grandfather has ill with his lung, and my father listened the doctors advise then sent my grandfather to my uncle's home which lived in a rural. Now, my grandfather's lung disease is cured and he is more happy than ever. Now he often says that living in the rural he can live longer than living in the city. Besides the clear air, the other aspects of the rural's environment is better than city, so the living in a rural is better than city. On the other hand, living in a rural people will feel less depress than living in a city. Living in a city, we should work hard to improve our income and position, which product many depresses to us. Now many people living in the city should stand the house, job, marriage and other depress, which trigger many physiological and psychological ills. Although we have less opportunities and less incomes when Living in a rural, we can have a happy and healthy life. So, in this aspects, living in a rural is better than living in a city. To sum up, I concede that living around a lot of people has many benefits to us, however, considering the great benefits that living in a rural area to our life and health, I think it is wise for us to choose our station that living in a rural area is better than a urban.