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2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(18):节约型社会

发布时间:2014-02-19 17:24浏览次数:752
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目前我们国家在建设节约型社会,请你根据自己的实际生活情况,向全校同学发出倡议。内容从下面几个方面着手,开头已给出,不计入总词数。词数100左右。
1. 吃零食方面;
2. 服装打扮方面;
3. 节约用水、电方面;

4. 文具方面。


Dear classmates,
Chairman Hu called on the whole society to build China into a saving country last year. As a student, I think 
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Dear classmates, Chairman Hu called on the whole society to build China into a saving country last year.As a student,I think we should do something what we can do to answer to Chairman Hu's call.Someone might say:"we are just students,what are we supposed to do for a social policy?"Yes we are students and we haven't much time to deal with social activities,but there is something we can easily handle with.First,we can spend less money on snack food such as hamburger、hotdog、ice cream、all sorts of beverage,etc.And second,many students especially girls will agree with that——if we sometimes hold off the consumption of clothing,we will cut a big outlay of cash.The third,stop wasting water and eletric,turn off the tap or the light when you don't use it.And the last,we don't need any pen、pencil、notebook、ink or other stationery,if we already have many. Are they simple tasks?why not we start to try it?let's!

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