4. 文具方面。
单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段。
Dear classmates, Chairman Hu called on the whole society to build China into a saving country last year.As a student,I think we should do something what we can do to answer to Chairman Hu's call.Someone might say:"we are just students,what are we supposed to do for a social policy?"Yes we are students and we haven't much time to deal with social activities,but there is something we can easily handle with.First,we can spend less money on snack food such as hamburger,hotdog,ice cream,all sorts of beverage,etc.And second,many students especially girls will agree with that——if we sometimes hold off the consumption of clothing,we will cut a big outlay of cash.The third,stop wasting water and eletric,turn off the tap or the light when you don't use it.And the last,we don't need any pen、pencil、notebook、ink or other stationery,if we already have many. Are they simple tasks?Why not we start to try it?