2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

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as is shown in the above picture. in the potted flowers have withered beause water too muchwater in the name of the concern.potted flowers is symbol of parents concer . for my perpective too much spoil the child.first,they always self-centered spoiled child.then they always rely on parents todo eveything . last when in the face of cruel reality. they are likely to surrender to difficulties. so i think parents should exercise the childs independence when they are young