2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

In our life ,everyone hope can success through hard work and strong will .yes, strong will is unnecessary for everybody. It is key and promise to success who have strong will . each path all full of rug and some unpleasant ,but you can pass it if you never lose strong will . like Paul from the famous work "How the steel was tempered " .He is a example that never bow to destiny .even he stock write book in his late life . He is a hero who always stick justice and life positively . Not anybody can finish great mission , only do it by one has strong will . as a student also do it , we need work hard and never give up . To be a useful person , we should have strong will to our life .