2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

学术词汇使用较丰富，拼写做的很棒；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章层次较为清晰。

At present,there are exist the excessive packaging on the many products.Excessive packaging have all kinds of forms,especially in cosmetics and health products.In our long life,there is no doubt that we can't avoid the excessive packaging of products. From my point my view,there are some reasons as the following: First of all,as we all know,people are more likely to buy beauty goods.If the company desire more profit ,they will catch the psychology of consumer and design more beautiful.Second,Chinese people tend to give the present with high price which result in excessive packaging. I think excessive packaging have more negative effects than positive .Excessive packaging waste many resources.At the meanwhile,it will pollute the environment and make rubbish. Only we reject the excessive packaging,we can have a good tomorrow.