2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(17):Life in the future

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In the future,I think people's life will magically change,just like the pictures we watched in science fiction movies.human's average life span will reach around 120 years due to the development of medical science;The problem of pollution which baffled people nowadays,will be solved because of the finding of new energy.People's daily life will be totally different from of today,for example,robotic will be produced to help people do their housework;Chairs can change their colour to fit to the clothing people wear;Mobile phone will not in pockets, but be conveniently put on wrist,so that we can see each other when calling;You even can enter into the space for a holiday by the new style elevator!