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2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:33浏览次数:1998
要求:
1、近十年来某城市越来越多人选择出去旅游 
2、出现这种现象的原因 

3、这种现象可能产生的影响 

表格:

1995   2000  2005 
1万人   近4万 12万以上 

用户的作文(系统评分82.0分
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;复杂句采用很棒;作者词汇表达恰当,同时能较灵活地使用学术词汇。

用户练习作文:

As the quality of life rises in the decades,the tendency to travel all around the world in the certain city is becoming hotter and hotter.From a chart above ,we can make some conclusions that when it was in 1995,there was just ten thousand people choosing travelling as a relaxing lifestyle in their leisure time,that number comes up to 40 thousand in 2000,and over 120 thousand in year 2005. One of the reasons why the number keeps going up has been revealed at the opening of this passage,it is due to the quality of life being improved by the government .It is the rapid development of our economics that leads to the good income for the citizens.Besides,people in the modern society are face with much more pressure than before,so everyone does want to cultivate their good temper in the complex situation in order to deal more well with things not only in their job but also their neighborhood relationship. For my perspective,it is such a good idea to go on a trip t relax ourselves sometimes,for that we can not get up well with the world under the great stress or just working without enjoying.Only alternate work with rest can we live a healthy life.

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