2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。

It is universal that the scene happens.When kids go back home,parents want to care about them.But because of Internet,kids express their feeling online.They prefer their parents see it mine rather than talk with them about it.The picture reflects the Internet decrease people's communication face to face.It is the impact on interpersonal communication that Internet brings to us. The more time we spend on Internet,the less time it takes us to talk face to face.It extends the gap between parents and kids,making it difficult for parents to talk with kids.and kids can be alone as talking with parents less.Although the virtual world is interesting,kids lose the happiness when they stay with parents. However,one cent has its two points.With Internet,it is convenient to chat.As far as i'm concerned,on the one hand,interpersonal communication benefits from Internet,on the other hand,Internet does harm to people's relationship.What we should do is to avoid its disadvantages and make full use of its advantages.