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文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;全文结构较为严谨。
Should We Save Money All The time? When it comes to save money or not, there will be a heated discussion about it, some folks are in favor of it,others are not. Just like that every coin has two sides, different people insist on different views. However, from my perspective , I support on saving money .My reasons are asa follows. At the beginning , to save money may help cultivate independence for most of our students. Collecting coupons , looking for group-buy deals and buying on sale clothes are part of the approaches we can use to save money. To some extend , not only can we purchse what we want , but also pursuit what we want all the way. Furthermore , saving money is a good habit for all of us , especially our college students . Though some folks say that it seems not a smart way to consume in this way , do what we can do to save money is worth to imitate. It is own individuals issues. In a word , college students save money should be advocated , which will cause positive influence upon society.