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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33544
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分79.0分
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文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

Should We Save Money All The time? When it comes to save money or not, there will be a heated discussion about it, some folks are in favor of it,others are not. Just like that every coin has two sides, different people insist on different views. However, from my perspective , I support on saving money .My reasons are asa follows. At the beginning , to save money may help cultivate independence for most of our students. Collecting coupons , looking for group-buy deals and buying on sale clothes are part of the approaches we can use to save money. To some extend , not only can we purchse what we want , but also pursuit what we want all the way. Furthermore , saving money is a good habit for all of us , especially our college students . Though some folks say that it seems not a smart way to consume in this way , do what we can do to save money is worth to imitate. It is own individuals issues. In a word , college students save money should be advocated , which will cause positive influence upon society.

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