2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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It is believed that the computer can do every things.In the time they created ,scientist were carried away by its calculating speed,maybe they made a miracle.It is gradually used not only in mathematics,physics,chemistry and astronomy,but in the place of hospital,school,military army to replace the work of man.For this reason, the computer was entitled “Electronic Brain” in terms of appreciation.