文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词。
It is a quite good thing to help others while they need.But at the same time,in some cases,we need to refuse them.For instance,when we are in a big fix,we can't.When we are busy to finish the work before the deadline,we can't.When we are working,we can't. Some people should have said"no" while they don't.To some extent,they are afraid to hurt those who need help and perhaps they want to make more friends. Sometimes,it is a pleasure to help others,bur it can also mess things up.On the one hand,helping others may delay your working schedule,which you're perhaps fired by your boss.On the other hand,it will mess up your initial plan to spend a holiday or something else.