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1999年1月英语四级作文真题:别害怕说“不”

发布时间:2013-05-14 18:33浏览次数:1891
要求:
  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic. Don’t Be Afraid to Say“No”. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
  1.别人请求帮助时,在什么情况下我们会说“不”
  2.为什么有些人在该说“不”的时候不说“不”
  3.该说“不”时,不说“不”的坏处
用户的作文(系统评分73.0分
评语:

文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词。

用户练习作文:

It is a quite good thing to help others while they need.But at the same time,in some cases,we need to refuse them.For instance,when we are in a big fix,we can't.When we are busy to finish the work before the deadline,we can't.When we are working,we can't. Some people should have said"no" while they don't.To some extent,they are afraid to hurt those who need help and perhaps they want to make more friends. Sometimes,it is a pleasure to help others,bur it can also mess things up.On the one hand,helping others may delay your working schedule,which you're perhaps fired by your boss.On the other hand,it will mess up your initial plan to spend a holiday or something else.

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