2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(16):中国十大新闻人物徐本禹

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Xu benyu,who is one of the ten most moving figures of china in 2004,impressed me as a generous,benevolent,unselfish man by his determination of dedicate himself to education of poor area. In 1982,Xu benyu was born in Liaocheng,a city of Shandong province.Now is a postgraduate at Huazhong Agriculture University,Xu benyu went along to Dafang county,a remote poor area in Guizhou province,and started his teaching job in there.Moved by his perseverance,five of his schoolmates followed his way to support this area's education ,and many other students said that they will join Xu benyu after graduation.Today the educational situation have greatly changed in Dafang county.