2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

文中词汇表达不够丰富，学术词汇方面要多累积；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Nowadays,the shopping online has been a fashion in the world. As we know that it will save mucht time and money if you Shopping online. so most of us we choice the way of shopping. on the other hand, we often meet some problems with online shopping, because we can't touch the goods as we pay for it, so we can't check it online too. sometimes , there are a lot of bad goods that we bought from the internet, it's really a problem for everyone. you could get the right goods if you are luck enough. in my opinion, we advise that we should choice the right shop online for safety. so we should make choice carefully as we shopping online.