2005年6月18日英语四级作文真题:教师节

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Teacher‟s Day Happy the Teacher's Day. Today is the Oct.10th, Teacher's Day,First,I hope all the teacher of the world could happy,health. My teacher gives many in my life,both knowledge and others,like my parents,when I want to give up and have difficult,they give me a hand. I will have study hard to appreciate them.Hope they can see my great success.