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2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(15):扶不扶

发布时间:2014-02-19 17:21浏览次数:1559
要求:
一天放学后,李明和王平看到一位骑车的老人摔了下来,伤了腿,流着血,不少人围了过去。有人建议将老人抬到树下,李明不同意,说不能动,要检查一下。这时老人没有了呼吸,李明让王平给急救中心打电话,他为老人做人工呼吸,另一工人帮助止血,没过十分钟,老人开始动弹了。急救中心的医生赶到,说李明做得对。
 
要求:
写一篇120字的短文。可以增强细节,以使意思联贯。开头已给出,不计如总字数。
参考词汇:
1. 急救中心 the First Aid Centre
2. 口对口人工呼吸方式mouth-to-mouth way
One day, after school was over, Li Ming and Wang Ping were walking in the street when they …
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;句式变化多样;文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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One day,after school was over,Li Ming and Wang Ping were walking in the street when they saw an old man fall down from his bicycle,his left leg was broke and it was bleeding,he lay in the ground seems very painful.In a moment many people crowded around him,some of them said that they should put the old man to the roadside under the trees,but Li Ming who had learned some medical knowledges disagree with that,insisted to check up the injured one first.Unexpectedly,the old man stopped his breathing,everyone were getting nervous except Li Ming,who soon found the way deal with this accident,he asked Wang Ping to call the First Aid Centre,he used the mouth-to-mouth way to the old man,and another worker volunteer stopped bleeding.Less than ten minutes later,the old man awaked from the shock and started to move his body.Li Ming had been praised by the First Aid Centre doctor for his proper and timely process.

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