2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题TASK2

文中学术词汇表达比较恰当，词汇拼写要再接再厉；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；全文结构较为严谨。

Can development of society contribute life standard to decline? For recent decades this issue have divided the public. Even today it still sparks bitter controversy among the whole society. Of course, it is undeniable that citizens are living in a worse enveriment as the result of developing industrialization.Temperatures climbed more rapidly in recent decades as the use of fossil fuels proliferated and greenhouse gas levels continued to soar.At the same time,extrem weather events like hurricanes are becoming more frequent.The public have to pay the price of imbalancing of ecology and polluting,such as a high risk to suffer asthma and extinction of species. In addition, fierce competition should be charge for uncomfortable life.That is to say,people pay more attention to how to promote their positions and hunt approaches to improve income to supprot their families,meanwhile,they ignore the importance of blood relationship,not to say neighbourhood.Hereby,people become indifferent and numbe to interpersonal relation. There are some solutions can be used to address above problems.Initially,the government is encouraged to set down sustainable and enverimental development strategy to guarantee a harmonious surroundings for the public.Furthermore,people should face competition and pressure on the right way, which can translate into motive power insteading of burden. In sum,personally, I believe the issue can be addressed if the solutions above put into practice.Only when the whole society make concerted efforts can problem be tackled in the near future.