2006年12月英语六级作文真题:西方的节日

作者学术词汇积累做的很棒，但总体词汇丰富度要加强；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

A great number of people are keen on western festivals that catch even more attention than festivals in china.People ,especially the youth,are investing more and more time and energy to them. In my opinion,there are tow reasons accounting for such phenomenon.To begin with,people regard celebrating the western festivals as a fashion.If they don not enjoy these festivals as others,they think they are left behind by the developing world,which is considered as a shame.Then,the fast developing society and the quick tempo of the life burden the poeple,so they need more entertainments to relax them. The western festivals give them excuse and chance to release their pressures. Such phenomenone have both negative and positive influences.It benefits the development of consumption .However,it also cause the lost of traditional culture.