单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;句式变化不明显,另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例;连词使用偏少。
Dec.23,2008 Dear Mr.Johnson, We have received 3,000 productions from your company on Dec.22.However according to our signing of the No.35 order,the number of productions must be 3,500,we haven't received the last 500 so far.Please check your product list. We are looking forward to your early reply! Yours sincerely, Wang Haiyang