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When I was young,my geography teacher impress me the most.He teached me many thing,such as how to learn professional knowledge from book,how to learning.He help me a lot of things which have an good influence on me.I respect of my geography teacher very much.Nowadays,I want to show my respect to him,think you very much,my dear teacher.