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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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The implication implicit in the chart can be elaborated as follow:the richer people pay more in education which bring about a higher degree. The reason on account of the difference of the education pays are complicated.First and mainly,the life pressure make them focus on substantial need and have not time,money and vigor to consider the area of culture.By addition,people are void of senses of the importance of education so they prefer to pay more to enjoy life than to accept education. The condition should seriously concern us.Relevant government authorities should take effective action to strengthen the compulsory education while citizens should focus more on education.

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