一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

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today,i helped my mother done some housework ,did my homework,played ping-pong,and watched TV,i also go out with my best friend ,we go to shopping,had a drinking,we also watch a movie!at least we had a dinner,we go to school and see our teacher,he is still teaching match,he still know us !we are very happy,what a plenitude day!