2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

希望学术词汇的使用能更熟练一些，还要加强单词拼写的检查；句式偏短，建议加强复杂句的使用；层次欠清晰，衔接成分很少。

Nowdays it seems that computers were our good friend and we did not do many things without them. We use it consiquencilly ,for exmple:we shopping...chatting with friends...playing games...studying...watching movies...and so on. The relationship between computer and we was close.It is well-knowed that computr was our very good partner.But we should not only see the advantagers of computer, we should take cosider of the disadvantagers of it. For exmple if you have a computer you will do many things that computer can do and you will did not do something that you can do and you did not do things you wanted to do.You bacam lazy gradully.And you will have lees time to communicate with your family,your friends. In my opinion,we should use computer help us to solve the problems we do not know,but we should not rely on it comletelly.Only in this way can we make friends with computer!