2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题TASK2

作者词汇基础扎实，拼写也很棒；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

Can development of society contribute life standard to decline? For recent decades this issue has divided the public. Even today it still sparks bitter controversy among the whole society. Of course, it is undeniable that citizens are living in a worse environment as the result of developing industrialization. Temperatures climbed more rapidly in recent decades as the use of fossil fuels proliferated and greenhouse gas levels continued to soar. At the same time, extrem weather events like hurricanes are becoming more frequent. The public have to pay the price of unbalancing of ecology and polluting, such as a high risk to suffer asthma and extinction of species. In addition, fierce competition should be charge for uncomfortable life. That is to say, people pay more attention to how to promote their positions and hunt approaches to improve income to support their families, meanwhile, they ignore the importance of blood relationship, not to say neighbourhood, hereby, and people become indifferent and number to interpersonal relation. There are some solutions can be used to address above problems.Initially,the government is encouraged to set down sustainable and environmental development strategy to guarantee a harmonious surroundings for the public.Furthermore,people should face competition and pressure on the right way, which can translate into motive power instead of burden. In sum, personally, I believe the issue can be addressed if the solutions above put into practice. Only when the whole society makes concerted efforts can problem be tackled in the near future.