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2005年6月英语六级作文真题:关于盗版

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:28浏览次数:1054
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Say No to Pirated Products. You should write at Least 150 words following the outline given below: 
1. 目前盗版的现象比较严重 
2. 造成这种现象的原因及危害 
3. 我们应该怎么做
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文章学术词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

用户练习作文:

Say No to Pirated Products Nowadays,there is a growing number of pirated products flood to market.It is high time to take effective measures to solve this problem. Many reasons account for this phenomenon.For example,it is interest driven that abstract more and more people infringe other's copyright.In addition,the rule of intellectual property rights protecting is not integrity,which leads people are more available to do that.That result pirated products confuse markets and break down writers' create enthusiasm.Thus,it is crucial to punish piracy behavior.Furthermore,we should improve the system and encourage to purchase genuine products. If all the solutions mentioned are adopted,I believe that we can appreciate more literature treasure.

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