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Say No to Pirated Products Nowadays,there is a growing number of pirated products flood to market.It is high time to take effective measures to solve this problem. Many reasons account for this phenomenon.For example,it is interest driven that abstract more and more people infringe other's copyright.In addition,the rule of intellectual property rights protecting is not integrity,which leads people are more available to do that.That result pirated products confuse markets and break down writers' create enthusiasm.Thus,it is crucial to punish piracy behavior.Furthermore,we should improve the system and encourage to purchase genuine products. If all the solutions mentioned are adopted,I believe that we can appreciate more literature treasure.