2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多。

Excessive Packaging With the economy devolping,we are more wealthy than before in average.Therefore,we spend more money in buying kinds of goods.Nevertheless,it's a phenomenon that a lot of goods are excessive packaging recently. The live level of improving is one of the important reason leading to the phenomenon happening. Absolutly the packaging goods can appeal consumers to buy.However, when various producers excessily stress the view,the phenomenon of excessive packaging will appear. As far as I am concerned,in order to properbly appeal more consumers,producers should stress the quality of goods.In addition,consumers should quit overexpending.Last but not least,the goverment need to take some meastures to reduce the phenomenon excessive happening.