2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章词汇表达丰富，学术词汇积累做的也很棒；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

As computers have been more and more popular in people,a lot of convenient,discuss and problems brought by the computers attract our attention. As we all know,the first computer appeared at the middle of last century,which was a huge monster that its mass almost equaled to two rooms'. At the initial ages,the computers could only used to make some simple calculate. However,with the development of the technology and science,they have been cuter and cuter ,and it seems that functions they could provide have also been more and more redundant.Nowadays, people rely on computers much,while they are able to utilize them to calculate,watch movies,listen to music,communicate with others through the Internet by a variety of software or apps installed on the computers.On summary,computers take us convenient and sufficient life. On the other hand, troubles accompany with the computers are account for a lot,too.they push us into a virtual world which parts of human beings are stuck or addicted into .The relationships of people in real world are getting strained.people even lose some of the ability of communication in real world.Moreover,cheat and pretense are full of the internet through computers. In short,computers are like swords with double-edged.Only if men have to utilize them in correct ways,they can generate benefit and advantages.