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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17577
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

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文章能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,同时请仔细检查词汇的拼写;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;建议平时练习中,多多背诵一些好的句子和文章。

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We all know that our nowadays life has a big different from past since the most significant advancements on science and technology. Some people think that there is no significant advancements affecting people' lives would be happen in the future because they have already take place. However ,that is not the case. First of all ,with the science improving and the new technology coming ,there are many new jobs would coming .Also many humans' work would be replaced by new mechines. So ,many people would face unemployment in the future .And the others problems will follw,Such as the incrising crime rate ,the unsafety society and so on . The second point is related to emviroment. Many goverments are continue virgorously developing their contry but ignore what negtive effect they produced .Take a instance, the air quality is so terrible now compare to the past. It is because that a great expanse of wetland is uesd to built factories and buildings, the most harmful air can not be purify.At the same time, the number of vehicle in the highway is still comsiderable.So we will face the fact that a more serious air pollution. In additionally,we would work and live far more away from our famliy based on the highly improved transportation.It takes the problem is that we would have less communication with our parents and friends.Although we could link to each other by cellphone or Internet ,we can not be so closed like it in the past . To conclude, with the science and technology improving ,we will still face many new problems.

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