2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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nowadays with the fast development of technology ,computers could be seen in almost each one's house and they've been a most important part of our lives.we can benefit so much from the computers.we should use computer in a right way. it's known to all that computers not only help us keep in touch with our friends relatives and even those people we don't know but also present us with all kinds of news so that we can have a sense of the important things happen in the world.Besides computer is so wisdom that i can learn so much knowledge from it.Last but not least we can finish our work effiently with the computer.