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作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
On the picture,"Once I learn how to use Google,isn't that all the education I really need?"Obviously,in the youngster's eyes,education means learning to obtain information. Fist of all,we are living in an Internet society.It seems that we are overwhelmed in the Internet life.There is no doubt that the Internet have a greater influence on our education.The Internet provides equal opportunities for all people,who can get access to the Internet.On other words,the Internet makes education more equitable and reduce our spending. Although the power of the Internet is all pervasive but its many negative effects are already visible.For example,we are exposed to online pornography and violence.Therefore,education means not only learning how to obtain information but also learning obtain what information. As a college student,I am convinced that the Internet has provided modern people with a great many conveniences on education,but we should use Internet with wisdom and we must acquire other important qualities.
