拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
On the picture,"Once I learn how to use Google,isn't that all the education I really need?"Obviously,in the youngster's eyes,education means learning to obtain information. Fist of all,we are now living in an Internet society.It seems that we are overwhelmed in the Internet life.There is no doubt that the Internet have a greater influence on our education.The Internet provides equal opportunities for all people,who can get access to the Internet.On other words,the Internet makes education more equitable and reduce our spending. Although the power of the Internet is all pervasive but its many negative effects are already visible.For example,we are exposed to online pornography and violence.Therefore,education means not only learning how to obtain information but also learning obtain what information. As a college student,I am convinced that the Internet has provided modern people with a great many conveniences on education,but we should use Internet with wisdom and we must acquire other important qualities.