2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Nowadays with the fast development of technology,computers could be seen in almost each one's house and they've been a most important part of our lives. We can benefit so much from the computers and we should use computer in a right way. It's known to all that computers not only help us keep in touch with our friends relatives and even those people we don't know but also present us with all kinds of news so that we can have a sense of the important things happen in the world.Besides computer is so wisdom that i can learn so much knowledge from it.Last but not least we can finish our work efficiently with the computer. But when it refer to the disadvantages of computer that we hatred so much,it's as much as advantages.First computer games are so attracted that many students can not but just indulged in it day in and day out.And the second so many unhealthy things on the net will no doubt do harm to kids' development. Every coin has two sides.But we should not eat for fear of choke.It's wise of us to use computer correctly and decorate our lives with computer.