2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

nowadays，computer have improved quickly and more and more people do jobs or play in internet. it's necessary for our daily life.and many people is researching robots, to use computers instead of men to do works. some people think it's very benefits for human being, but some people think computers can't instead of men, and how we treat them is a very important problem. as far as i am concerned, each coin has two sides, so it is clear-cut for use computers to instead of men has it is advantages and disadvantages. we can use robots do jobs which dangerous for people, and some works people can hardly achieve. in fact ,computer is a product of man ,so computer can't instead of human's brain. so we should distinguish computer and man.