2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Nowadays with the fast development of technology,computers could be seen in almost each one's house and they've been a most important part of our lives. We can benefit so much from the computers and we should use computer in a right way. It's known to all that computers not only help us keep in touch with our friends relatives and even those people we don't know but also present us with all kinds of news so that we can have a sense of the important things happen in the world.Besides it is so wisdom from whom make i uppercase learn much.Last but not least we can entertain ourselves with the computer. Although computer has so many advantages,it's disadvantages are also evident.Firstly computer games are so attracted that many students can not but just indulged in it day in and day out.Secondly so many unhealthy things on the net will no doubt do harm to kids' development and so on. Every coin has two sides.But we should not eat for fear of choking.It's wise of us to use computer correctly and live a happy life.