题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
Nowadays with the fast development of technology,computers could be seen in almost each one's house and they've been a most important part of our lives. We can benefit from the them a lot and we should use computer in a right way. It's known to all that computers not only help us keep in touch with our friends, relatives and even those people we don't know but also present us with all kinds of news so that we can have a sense of the important things happen in the world.Besides it is so wisdom from whom I can learn much.Last but not least we can entertain ourselves with the computer. Although computer has so many advantages,it's disadvantages are also evident.Firstly computer games are so attracted that many students cannot but just indulged in it.Secondly there are so much unhealthy things on the net that it will no doubt do harm to kids' development and so on. Every coin has two sides.But we should not eat for fear of choking.It's wise of us to use computer correctly and live a happy life.