2004年1月英语六级作文真题:浪费现象

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With the development of science and society,the phenomena on the certain school's loss have been being severe increase.so we have to pay much attention on how to deal with this problem. First of all,I will make further instructions,about the loss of the school including the loss of food,The loss of water and the loss of electricity.Assumption that we see the college students as an example,for instance,in canteen,one student wastes some rice、 vegetables、water 、electricity.add up it,all students will waste how much food、water and energy. What's more,we should be stressed that disadvantages of the loss .For the waste,whatever it's much or little, we can't ignore the disadvantages that it brings to.when it comes to the hazard , in my opinion, such as,it will cause that many people haven't had food,even lead to much more distance on the rich,even pollute the evironment,and the quality of the air drop dymaticly. All in all,the much waste we causing,the hazard it brings.So,more and more people appeals that we should do some things in order to avoid wasting on my own.Let's go ahead.