2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者能词汇表达较准确熟练，但请仔细检查词汇的拼写；层次欠清晰，衔接成分很少；连词使用偏少。

Nowadays. can we find a person who has not expericed online shopping? defenititely not. online shopping is coming into the most cities due to the repid development of internet technology. online shopping is welcomed by most people due to various reasons. From the perspective for consum, it can save some time for people who don't have much spare time, just click the mouse, they can get whatever they want while staying at home. for the re, it can cut some cost for person who don't have much trade money. And they don't rent a house and spent some money on employees. In my opinion, we need make some laws with the increase onlie shopping. Only this way can we enjoy and convenice online shopping.