文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请注意分段。
I have a good friend.Her name is lucy.she has long black hair,two big black eyes,a high nose and a little red mouth.she is a beautiful girl. we often shopping together.That is all the girl's hobby.I like talk with lucy,because she is very humor.whenever i met with difficulties,she came to help me,she is a good person.I will do a lifetime of good friends with her.