小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend.Her name is lucy.She has long black hair,two big black eyes,a high nose and a little red mouth.She is a beautiful girl. We often shopping together.That is all the girl's hobby.I like talk with lucy,because she is very humor.Whenever I met with difficulties,she came to help me so she is a good person.I will do a lifetime of good friends with her.