题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
注意文中出现的部分句子错误;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;文中缺乏丰富的词汇表达,但词汇拼写要更加认真。
in our life ,we need of trust,if our life get a lack of trust,everything will get terrible and confused.because of trust,we can get on well with others,we strat to share happiness and sadness with other people.so we strat to meet new friends, we can improve ourselves by new frieds. because of trust,there are more benift by our business,we can learn about much information by our friends,classmates,colleague and so on,it is necessary for us to come to the top. wherever we are ,whatever we do ,we could not live without trust,fish need water as we need trust.