2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

简单句比重稍微偏高，文中有句子错误；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构；请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性，但文中有较多拼写错误。

Some people many believe that they can be succssful only with foutunation.Actually,someone who successed just show others how lucky they are without announment of their hard working.Come back to rality,it is the strong will that is the nessecrily promine of success.Looking to the history,none of the man we called succeesful man has no strong will.As for one famous author said,you will gain one thing only in the time you want it stongly.After all,aumsing people havn't strong will,how can they succeed? As for we student,learning isn't a easy job,we can get almost nothing if we don't learn hard.If we get nongthing,we would be useless to the world. To the whole,nonthing succeeds without a strong will.