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1999年专四作文真题:电视广告的优缺点

发布时间:2013-05-15 10:11浏览次数:7894
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Direction:We see advertisements on television everyday. Some people think that TV advertising brings as benefits, but others don’t think so. What is your opinion? A major advantage/disadvantage of advertising on television
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A major advantage of advertising on television Advertisement on television is playing an important role in our daily life,which has aroused a heated discussion. Different people hold quite different ideas to this topic.In my opinion,TV advertising brings benefits to us far more than its disadvantages. There are two main important reasons to support my view.In the first place,we can get a lot information about the goods we are interested in through watching TV advertising such as the manufacture, the effect,and others opinion about the product that we want to buy,especially for those old people who are too old to move out.So it is no doubt that TV advertising is convenient to us.In the second place,TV advertising is an effective way for the manufacturers to show their goods and also bring a big profit to the company.At the same time,if we stand on the position of the consumer,we can purchase the better production in that they have been put on the TV advertising for a long time and if there are some problems about the goods,It can not be accepted to display on TV. In a nutshell,TV advertising is effective and convenient to people in all of the world and it will become a popularity sooner or later.

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