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A major advantage of advertising on television Advertisement on television is playing an essentional role in our daily life,which has aroused a heated discussion. Different people hold quite different ideas to this topic.In my opinion,TV advertising brings benefits to us far more than its disadvantages. There are two important reasons to support my view.In the first place,we can get a lot of information about the goods we are interested in through watching TV advertising such as the manufacture, the effect,and others opinion about the product that we want to buy,especially for those old people who are too old to move out.So it is no doubt that TV advertising is convenient to us.In the second place,TV advertising is an effective way for the manufacturers to show their goods and also bring a big profit to the company.At the same time,if we stand on the position of the consumer,we can purchase the better production in that they have been put on the TV advertising for a long time and if there are some problems about the goods,It can not be accepted to display on TV. In a nutshell,TV advertising is effective and convenient to people all over the world and it will become a main stream sooner or later.
